Hey Michael,

I went through various scenarios with this, but I really wanted the baby in here and didn't like the idea of having him walk away from the baby or to walk away without knowing. I originally didn't have the bridge, which then sort of left it open as to whether he sailed away on the sea or died in the sea.

I do think that Vic's changes make this sound ever so much better, so maybe you'll sail in here again with your mind changed?!

Also, bond, vague, ho, ho! Thanks for your thoughts on this!

Lisa