Hi Pop,

Thanks so much for your nice visit! Yes, I can see now that the drowning occurred without enough warning. I wrestled with this song and various scenarios a lot. I was messing with it some more, after reading your comment and others, and then I saw that Vic had posted some great fixes to it. I've added Vic's changes and I may be adding some additional ones.

Regarding the flowers in the hair, lullaby lines...I was trying to build up to a wedding of sorts with the flowers in the hair, and the baby coming with the lullaby. I wanted the listener to think that he knew about the baby. Regarding a recording -- I don't do music, so I don't have one.

Your comments and feedback were very helpful....thanks so much!

Lisa