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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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I would gather she lost him at sea off a boat of some kind.
Lisa, it's a good write, as pop pointed out, the losing him at sea might happen too abruptly.
You have this nice 60's type of "woodstock" story of falling in love,
Maybe as he reached to put the flowers in your hair he fell off, or maybe a storm came and he fought to keep the boat alive.
I think it mostly works, but that might be an issue.
Good Luck, Good Write Lisa!
Last edited by Bugsey; 08/21/13 02:00 PM.
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