Kay-lynn:Hi.

Listened to your mp3.

I love the way you make the lyrics and melody hit together, like a one-two punch. I think you nailed it. I wanted to jumpup and dance but I'm at work.

Have to listen again and I will see about coming up with a bridge suggestion.

I wanted to play with either Swim for It or this one as far as doing some arranging with guitars drums and bass.

Woman I love your melodies(Hey thats a good song title). I confess I am a sucker for a good melody.

Great work......Your fan always........Paul