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Theatre Extant
May not be what you think
only tests
to see what you know
Who are you
Where do you go
You may not get away
after all
You look at me
Think me a fool
But your reactions
Tell me a tall tale
Sooner or later
All is reveiled
Believe my fake
Or fall and fail
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I really like the sparse ending to the suno’s alternative rock version, and I have an idea to sing the third verse myself, which was left out of the suno version.
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Lyric rewrite? Third verse change ‘tall’to ‘true’??
Maybe not. I put on a show to pull you from your fake. Both of us lie, but you fall for my lie, and reveal your own. But you don’t know, that I now know.
shakespeare’s Hamlet, performed theatre within theatre (extant)to make the usurping king sweat, run from the room,….revealing his murderous guilt.
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Or ‘Believing my fake, you fall and fail’
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