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There's a warm and cozy diner where pickers like to meet
Nestled on the corner of Dream and Wandering St
They trade licks and lyrics, sometimes lies and sweet nothings
And ponder life's complexities over donuts and coffee

Betty's in the kitchen warming up her voice
Not afraid to sing with all the noise

They write songs about love, songs about loss
Songs about wisecracks that everybody knows
They sing about feeling good despite the evening news
The diner gets so crowded as the audience grows
Everybody's feelin' right, a new song every night
'Neath the neon lights, a new song every night

Sometimes patrons shout for the song they like best
Sometimes they just sit and listen like all the rest
It's not about the fame, it's not about the fortune
Pickers play for free as long as folks are havin' fun

They can't ever take a break
Cause' that slide player's case... is always full

They write songs about love, songs about loss...

Betty owns the diner, and she'll sing all night
You should hear her sing her song about her blackberry pie
Everybody's feelin' right, a new song every night
'Neath the neon lights, a new song every night

If there's something here you can use feel free ... No crediting required.

A New Song Every Night

Verse
There’s a neon-lit diner where the night owls meet
On the corner of Dream and Wandering street
Greasy strings and coffee, cheap guitars in hand
Trading truth for stories no one really planned

Pre-chorus
Yeah, the world spins crazy outside that door
But in here, they just keep coming back for more

Chorus
They sing about love, they scream about loss
Broken-down hearts and the lines we cross
Yeah, they drown out the noise of the 10 o’clock news
Turnin’ bad days into something you can use
It gets loud, it gets right, it gets outta control
Every soul in the room gonna play a role
Yeah, it all comes alive in those flickerin’ lights
A new song every night

Verse
Some shout requests, bangin’ time on the bar
Some just sit quiet like they’re carryin’ scars
No one’s getting rich, no one’s getting paid
But for a couple hours, man, the ghosts all fade

Pre-chorus
Ain’t about money, ain’t about fame
It’s about burnin’ in a three-minute flame

Chorus
They sing about love, they scream about loss
Broken-down hearts and the lines we cross
Yeah, they drown out the noise of the 10 o’clock news
Turnin’ bad days into something you can use
It gets loud, it gets right, it gets outta control
Every soul in the room gonna play a role
Yeah, it all comes alive in those flickerin’ lights
A new song every night

Bridge
Betty’s in the back with a cigarette smile
Says, “Stick around, I’ll play in a while”
She’s got a song ‘bout pie and a love gone wrong
And somehow it hits like a rock ‘n’ roll bomb

Final chorus
They sing about love, they scream about loss
Raise up a glass for the lines we cross
Yeah, the whole damn place starts shakin’ the floor
Like nobody’s ever felt this before
It gets wild, it gets free, it gets burnin’ bright
Like a spark gonna turn into a fire tonight
Yeah, you walk in lost, but you walk out right
With a new song every night

Outro
A new song every night

Yeah', that's what happens when you just throw words at music... winds up sounding like rap that you can't follow without the lyrics. Not that it matters anyway, you abandoned the storyline in the first verse. Typical generic 4chord Pop.

Sorry, not impressed. Not even close to what's in my head.

I would say "nice try", but that obviously only took SUNO about 2 minutes lol...

I do like the idea of a little pre-chorus though... may work on that

I was just trying to help a fellow songwriter. Maybe better luck next time.

Take a look... You inspired me despite SUNO, HA!

https://soundclick.com/song/15216937