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This one is pretty minimal in production and lyrically. Nekane is on vocals. I'm getting through the flu season here at my house, LOL. I'm feeling better, though. Lyrics at link https://s.disco.ac/wasxytbhmcehTIA ๐ง๐ถ๐๐
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Nice vox... as usual lol  This is kinda' weird... "When the color of blue Jilted my sky" ...maybe just me
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Nice vox... as usual lol This is kinda' weird... "When the color of blue Jilted my sky" ...maybe just me Thanks, JAPOV. In a poetic way, it what was once a source of peace (the blue sky) has now become a source of heartbreak. ๐๐ถ
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How do I survive When the color of blue Jilted my sky And simply broke me in two How do I survive My cloudy sky Of jilted blue Has simply Broke me in two...
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Very cool sync song , that sounds great
Last edited by bennash; 02/13/25 07:17 PM.
Weโre all built from the same dust and dreams,
Different roads, but the same means.
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I agree with Elvis. This seems ideal for sync. Maybe more so than as a stand-alone song because of the obscure and vague nature of the lyrics, something which could be an advantage in sync, along with its dreamy quality, which could lend itself to numerous cinematic contexts. Beautiful production!
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How do I survive When the color of blue Jilted my sky And simply broke me in two How do I survive My cloudy sky Of jilted blue Has simply Broke me in two... ๐
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Very cool sync song , wrong song , that sounds great Thank you. ๐ง๐
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I agree with Elvis. This seems ideal for sync. Maybe more so than as a stand-alone song because of the obscure and vague nature of the lyrics, something which could be an advantage in sync, along with its dreamy quality, which could lend itself to numerous cinematic contexts. Beautiful production! Thank you, Gavin, for your kind words. Yes, this one is for sync too. All my songs are for sync now. Artist cuts are hard to get even indies. Their managers, producers, etc, choose their songs for them anymore. It's not like it used to be back in the day.
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I agree with Elvis. This seems ideal for sync. Maybe more so than as a stand-alone song because of the obscure and vague nature of the lyrics, something which could be an advantage in sync, along with its dreamy quality, which could lend itself to numerous cinematic contexts. Beautiful production! Thank you, Gavin, for your kind words. Yes, this one is for sync too. All my songs are for sync now. Artist cuts are hard to get even indies. Their managers, producers, etc, choose their songs for them anymore. It's not like it used to be back in the day. Yeah tuff pitching songs , Sync ya got a chance
Weโre all built from the same dust and dreams,
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Very pretty.... like a beautiful early Fall, rainy morning.
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Very pretty.... like a beautiful early Fall, rainy morning. Thank you for your kind words. ๐ค๐
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A soul broke with
too much bending
Instead of soaring
Iโm descending
Is it worth the sad
How do I survive
When the color of blue
Jilted my sky
And simply
broke me in two
Whatโs left of me
canโt find the light
Stuck in the wreckage
of our fight
Is it worth the sad
How do I survive
When the color of blue
Jilted my sky
And simply
broke me in two
The ground beneath
wonโt let me rise
Still trapped under
your endless lies
How do I survive
When the color of blue
Jilted my sky
And simply
broke me in two
This is a superb lyric, starting with the first 2 lines..... and I love how you took an old theme and burned the mundane box, most of us write in, giving it a newness that comes with the kind of writing expressed here.
A soul broke with
too much bending....simple and to the point
Is it worth the sad....just a great line....particularly...โthe sadโ
When the color of blue
Jilted my sky........I interpreted blue to be sadness, thatโs why it makes sense
Even your use of the word โsimplyโ is perfect....I think you may have given some thought to its use....
Excellent writing Marilyn
Steve
Creators of music have a responsibility to their craft. When they have finished using all the notes and words, they must pass them down to the next generation with a simple request. โUse these to create new music.โ...Steven McDonald
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A soul broke with
too much bending
Instead of soaring
Iโm descending
Is it worth the sad
How do I survive
When the color of blue
Jilted my sky
And simply
broke me in two
Whatโs left of me
canโt find the light
Stuck in the wreckage
of our fight
Is it worth the sad
How do I survive
When the color of blue
Jilted my sky
And simply
broke me in two
The ground beneath
wonโt let me rise
Still trapped under
your endless lies
How do I survive
When the color of blue
Jilted my sky
And simply
broke me in two
This is a superb lyric, starting with the first 2 lines..... and I love how you took an old theme and burned the mundane box, most of us write in, giving it a newness that comes with the kind of writing expressed here.
A soul broke with
too much bending....simple and to the point
Is it worth the sad....just a great line....particularly...โthe sadโ
When the color of blue
Jilted my sky........I interpreted blue to be sadness, thatโs why it makes sense
Even your use of the word โsimplyโ is perfect....I think you may have given some thought to its use....
Excellent writing Marilyn
Steve Thank you, Steve, for your kind words. I wanted something sparse but effective and emotionally impactful. ๐๐ง
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I wanted something sparse but effective and emotionally impactful. ๐๐ง I think it's safe to say you expertly nailed that, Marilyn. Nicely done. Peace, Dave
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I wanted something sparse but effective and emotionally impactful. ๐๐ง I think it's safe to say you expertly nailed that, Marilyn. Nicely done. Peace, Dave Thank you, David, for your kind words. ๐
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I agree with Elvis. This seems ideal for sync. Maybe more so than as a stand-alone song because of the obscure and vague nature of the lyrics, something which could be an advantage in sync, along with its dreamy quality, which could lend itself to numerous cinematic contexts. Beautiful production! Thank you, Gavin, for your kind words. Yes, this one is for sync too. All my songs are for sync now. Artist cuts are hard to get even indies. Their managers, producers, etc, choose their songs for them anymore. It's not like it used to be back in the day. Yeah tuff pitching songs , Sync ya got a chance Thank you for your kind words.
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