Originally Posted by Little_stevie_b
Well I think it sucks. I don't like it at all. Why??? Because I'm jealous. Seriously Pauly, this one really came along well since you played it for me over the phone a few weeks ago. Only thing I'd work on is the music for the bridge. It doesn't change that much from the verses so there's no real lift to differentiate it leading into the last chorus. It is a little bit different but not much. But that's a small thing. This is a really solid lyric/story with no wasted time or words IMO. I also like the chord changes in the last two lines of the chorus. They bring a kind of tension into the works. Good for you my bestestest Internet friend.

Stevie


My Brother

You know I need to tell you Im very grateful for our friendship, the honesty between us was what made you comfortable enough to tell me on the phone the other day that my melody on "The Tower" was not what you had heard but you werent surprised because I did only country. I think it was only ten minutes later that I called back with a noncountry melody for this tune, altough this melody aint the same one, and well it might be a bit more country than the other, this song had sat without a melody til a comment from you inspired me to think outside my mormal comfort zone. It was durring a conversation with you that it was decided getting clean and sober wasnt in the cards for the guy in this tune, remember we laughed at all the possible routes that could be taken to kill this guy... Thanks for your friendship brother, as far as being jealous, thats just because you know what a great guy I am...duh !! smile

Cheers
Paul

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