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by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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Hey Paul,
Now that says it as it is.
Listening, I think the tempo is just a bit quick, maybe slow it down just a tad, and I reckon it will flow along better.
No nits on the writing, there's a good contrast in the sadness of the lyrics/vocal to the sweetness of the guitar.
I'd like to hear the vocal a bit more pronounced, it gets hidden under the acoustic at some points.
That's a solid write, cleaned up it's a keeper.
cheers, niteshift
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