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by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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Hey Shayne I like the comments but I was wondering how else can I put past tense in without were? does "Once" work? YESOnce I saw an angel Once a little girl Could heal the blind with a smile.... Also I know cliched rhymes are a no-no but I cant really follow that. Look at Micheal Jackson's "Liberian Girl" the song is based on the cliche. Not to many good rhymes or near rhymes for girl. I tend to think of one rule and forget the next a lot  . I'll bet Michael wrote that song...and artists have a different set of rules than writers only.I watch your dirty wings Feathers falling down Hitting the cold hard ground Like embers burning out. Is this better??? YES
“I usually start with a title or maybe a little rhyme or phrase.” - Harlan Howard
Co-writing = Compromise!
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