Most time Big Jim people offer suggestions which are not really critiques, I guess. and usually they suggestions are real good and nearly always make me rethink the lyrics and do a re-write. Sometimes 14 re-writes is usual for me.

I have been know to drive co-writers to dispair lol.

However 3 or 4 times someone has really torn into what I have written and things that were missed by me or not obvious have really improved my writing on those occations.

Of course innitialy I was angry with the critiques on a couple of examples, but then stood back and realised that the critiquer was right. I guess it how you say it sometimes... lol

I do however have two occations that were not only brutal but hurtful and dare I say it, nasty in the way my lyrics were critiqued by someone.

Not on this site I would hasten to add. And both times on other sites, I removed myself from those sites.. lol

I feel it was their loss not mine lol... nothing like self praise. lol

If I can think of the examples I will add them, but it was way back.

Come to think of it, one one occation, I had a brutal critique on JPF, but it wasnt nasty and it really helped on that occation, so I am thankful for it.... no names lol

Sorry if I didnt exactly answer your question.

critique me if you like. lol

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