Hi Linda,
I see some spots I would try to tighten up, keep or sweep smile

Oh people still (come by to see me) Unnecessary to the story, IMO, why not have them ask questions in the first line?)

Oh people still ask lots of questions
They like discussing who's
to blame

They wanna know how well I knew you
And did I know you robbed that train

They ask if you were my husband
And I tell them yes it's all true,








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