Hi Kim and Vic,

I think this has very good sound. Vic sounds like Johnny Cash again, and the song has a Johnny Cash vibe. I like the guitar tone in the intro/verse 1 - what kind of guitar/pedal/amp is that if you don't mind me asking?

The lyrics have a good hook and chorus. I don't think there is much meat to the story however. A series of observations about getting older but no real punchline or explanation as to what is making him feel that way. Leaves me hanging or wondering what it was all about.

Overall good though.

Colin

I try to critique as if you mean business.....

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