I liked the song overall. The recording was top-notch. Maybe the drum-track was a little high. I would've liked to hear the original(being a musician), I tend to look at stuff a little differently. Like, I can hum guitar solos and melodies, and not remember anything lyrically.
I think with what everyone is saying about the lyrics and not giving enough 'story' is interesting. i don't think it needs more 'story' other than what it has...the curveballs life throws at us. But Mackie's version has some good content, too. And it fits right in.
Good job Vic. Nice writting Kim.
Hey Kim,sent you a pm with a link

I have music for all of my songs and they vary from rock to country to folk and everywhere in between. (except rap)