HiDee Mz Lin'!

I can see this working WELL in 3rd Person..."(She Loves) The ONE WHO GOT AWAY"...with a lot MORE detailing on Their Relationship and HIS Heading off into The Sunset, never to be Seen Again.

Kind of a "Nights in El Paso"..without the Body Count!

Good Luck with it..you ARE On To Something here!

Best Wishes & Big Hugs,
Stan