OK, thanks for the feedback!

This is the story:

She was young, in love with her husband, and unknown to her he was carrying on some dark secret life.

He knew he had to run right before he was caught and took her out under the stars to say goodbye... without telling her he was going to disappear... then the posse showed up in the morning.

He loved her, but he loved being alive more -- if he was caught he'd be hanging from the gallows.

All the while she never knew his outlaw life existed, and when she found out it crushed her completely-- and he IS guilty of it all, whatever it is.

Thinking Jesse James or some other outlaw type... someone who was never caught.... only a fictional story!

How about a verse where she went to prison the rest of her life for being an "accomplice" although she was innocent? Would that be cool?




Linda

Last edited by Linda Adams; 12/08/10 06:35 PM.