Yann: Your opinion is just as valid as anyone else's. From your review, it seems that you had two issues:

1.) It got a little "too much the same" as the song when on.
2.) The good crafting is "too" obvious.

Hello, I think the majority of the amateur critiquers agreed with you. Now, the good thing about Harriet's review (and a few other posters) is that they pointed out a few ways to solve #1. If #1 gets taken care of, #2 goes away. It is only because you got a little "bored" that you started noticing the "craft" (ha, ha). In great songs, the craft is sort of transparent.

Kevin


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