Someone please do me a favor and ask all the others who posted a lyric or mp3 to jump in and participate. The true value of this experience is in DOING the critic and interacting with everyone on what works and what doesn't. Then when Harriet posts, you see what lessons she brings to the table and how it compares to your own observations. It is much easier to learn a lesson when it is someone else's song being discussed. That should be the goal for all involved. Learn how to write better songs.

Brian


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