Lovely tune Dan.

I think you might consider singing the 2nd "WATCHING LIFE GO BY" a measure earlier. That pause is the only thing that's not working for me. Of course if you filled the space with a cool guitar lick, the space in itself might become a hook.

Really nice tune. Great overall vibe. I really enjoyed it.

Peace,

Ian


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