lol, love the busted string line... I was just thinking on this part of the chorus:
"Just a broken hearted country boy from out in the sticks
Her tender lovin' hand would really do the trick"

If you could change it to read something about a boy from the "Hills" then change "trick" to "pill" , you'd kindof have a play on words, "Heal Billy" "Hillbilly" and the pill's his medicine, which is her smile


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