It is clever writing. MAB once pointed out a good trick: Compare each couple of lines or so and see if they point to the hook. All of your medical stuff continuously leads the listener/reader right to the hook.

I couldn't hear the tune. I would suggest getting an account at www.soundclick.com. It makes for the easiest listening experience of songs, demos and worktapes. This link here should get you right to the signup page: https://www.soundclick.com/community/NewSignup_AdFree.cfm?Band=Yes

Kevin


"Good science comes in peer reviewed journals. Conspiracy theories come in YouTube videos. "
Kevin @ bandcamp: Crows Say Vee-Eh