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Riot Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 10:51 PM
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Hard-Fi
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/19/26 06:43 PM
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No point in asking for a critique and then insulting everyone for giving honest respectful OPINIONS. If you cannot stand constructive criticism then don't post lyrics. I have read your lyrics and it is maybe best you do not see my full critique. You got off lightly with Yann. In light of your post here I would be more direct.
Your song has no meter, does not flow, makes little sense and on the odd occasion you do rhyme you use rhymes of convenience that bear no relation to the subject matter. You have a lot to learn both in writing lyrics and more important politeness.
PS. You posted this thread in the wrong forum.
Last edited by BIG JIM MERRILEES; 09/15/09 01:11 PM.
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