I am a little late to the game here. Really enjoying the singing and playing (reminds me a little bit of MJM here at the JPF).

I thought the lift needed a trifle more work. It seems that you're struggling to get this line "Is full of peace and quiet" out -- like you are unsure of the phrasing there.

I can hear a jazzy acoustic bass and a little conga action being added to fill it out, but still keep it warm and intimate.

Good song all around.

Kevin


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