Originally Posted by AJ Baker
Interesting work that you have here an ode to the over worked MOM.This is good work though because everyones tale needs to be told and appreciated. AJ

AJ,

I want to thank you for your nice words! Your lyric is quite hearfelt...and also couldn't hurt (imo) from adding more to it as Beth mentioned....thanks for sharing that. smile (btw, nice to meet you! )

Kristi
Originally Posted by Beth G. Williams
...I was going to suggest a bake sale to surprise her with a full body massage...

Beth!

Oh my goodness! Just a massage? How about a whole spa treatment!?! grin wink

Yes,I used your idea of just letting the mom thing out (glad you noticed)

Originally Posted by Beth G. Williams
would you mind if I poke around with it a bit

and YOU being a mom yourself, what better person to add to it! But I'm glad you see that I'm not just complaining...I hope that balance is in there.Your additions are priceless....I like how you did the cross out thingee too...it's helpful to compare...Great stuff Beth! Don't know about the word "bet" because I "know" this information to be true!! LOL (maybe for creative purposes..HA)

How about the dog is whining? I think you need to put your name on here as a cowriter my dear! Seriously. Can you imagine what might come out if we REALLY thought about it? Scary thought actually! HA HA

Thanks for your thoughtful words, though I can say the same for you! grin

Kristi

Last edited by Kristi McKeever; 07/14/08 11:19 PM.
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