lol - a song about me! Nah, my commute is only 40 miles one way smile

Musically, I think it's great. Lyrically, is well written. Only thing I'm not sure about is whether a long commute by itself is enough to make him think his life is out of control. Might be the kinda thing where you have to give examples from several aspects of his life to convince people that he really does need to simplify. A stressing job seems like an obvious one, maybe also something at home too - like his wife and he work different shifts and never see each other. Dunno - just thinking out loud...

Of course a killer commute is one important aspect grin

He should do what I do in the car - write lyrics grin

Scott