Louis,

Just want to say I really like the chorus and your delivery of the lyric. It really rings true.

I can see maybe having more things "at stake" for him in the verses. But the feeling is there and it's quite heartfelt.

Nice writing! smile

Kristi


A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist