Hi there Louis,

I believe we've crossed paths before, but never had an official howdy-do...so good morning!

First off, as an Officially Certified Lazy Person, I would love for you to post the lyrics up front. While they're there once you go to Soundclick, it's nice to give people an extra tease to go listen in the first place -- JMO...

Anyhoo, I think your song is pretty and melancholy and ultimately thought-provoking. The Life/Road theme is certainly popular, though, so I do think you might need a bit more detail, as Scott suggested...but you're 99% of the way there in my mind. I especially liked this line:

but the years roll by like highway signs

Vocally, I hear a Dylan-esque quality -- that is, if Dylan's lyrics were as intelligible as yours are! (no Dylan knocking, just stating the facts, folks!)

So overall, a moving entry for 9:30 in the AM....

Good luck with it!

Cheers,
Beth


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