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Bayside
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 10:48 PM
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Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 262
Serious Contributor
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Serious Contributor
Joined: Apr 2008
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Kevin, I like your song, LOVE the premise, and I happen to like the "get to be" and "thirty" pseudo-rhyme (because I am the self-proclaimed princess of pseudo-rhyme lol).
But I have to say I am with Bill Osofsky on this one...I am thirty four and have never had a "milkman", nor have I ever seen an episode of howdy doody, although my almost sixty dad tells me milky the clown was something to see! LOL.
(I cannot tell you how often he tells me about twin pines milk...some jingle that haunts him or something I guess I should pay beter attention! lol! I digress...)
I am not trying to be smarty pants! I just think your examples work better from an older perspective.
Maybe you could chang it to fifty instead of thirty?
But again, I REALLY like this song and the potential of it!!
All the best,
-Jamie
Jamie
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