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by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 10:48 PM
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Kevin, I'm not seeing how your examples relate to your hook. None of them are from when you were thirty. If they are, you'd be about 70-80 now and not likely to be putting out records, lol. It's well written, and I know what you're trying to say, but it may need a little rethinking. JMO. Good luck with it.
Bill
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