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by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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Joined: Jan 2007
Posts: 20
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John, personally i like this version much better. Think it would make a real fun song with fast music & loud vocal.
small nit: line 3 & 4
i can't wait
another night to hear your lies
i understand it's meaning, for some little reason it trips me up reading it. it's right on the tip of my fingers, like using "won't" instead of can't ??
just my 2 cents
good rewrite!/tom
kiss my tracks
you can kiss my tracks goodbye
I won't wait
another night to hear your lies
I've wasted too much time on you
you know what you can do
kiss my tracks
you can kiss my tracks goodbye
Last edited by tomwisnowski; 10/27/07 11:23 AM.
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