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by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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Joined: Oct 2007
Posts: 71
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Hey John,
Love the hook I think it's great, my favorite line... "now I know that playing poker is French for running round" ...so cool. Would like to hear the music to this one.
I had an idea for a little change in the second verse.
I said goodbye slammed on the gas
put that sucker in drive
'Cause baby my time for a good time
had finally arrived
In the last part of the chorus how about changing the line "it's my life" to..
I've wasted too much time on you
so you know what you can do
You can kiss my tracks
You can kiss my tracks goodbye
Anyway just a couple of thoughts.
Good work,
Harry
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