Dawg, Clark, Blake, Tampa, Ricki, John And Janice!

Dawg,

That my friend is an awesome compliment! Thanks. Dan.

Clark,

Thanks for the kind words and suggestions! I had that sixth line shortened originally...but threw in another kitchen for some reason. Will edit that out. I went with the "not someone like me line"...because it fit into the heart problems angle that the second verse starts with. Probably stick with that`n cause of that. Thanks again...and we all have them same flaws you speak of! They`re not just yours. [Linked Image] Thanks again. Dan.

Blake,

Heh-heh...I knew you`d get hooked on the hook! I will nuke kitchen from the chorus and innocent is a perfect tweak as well. Why didn`t I think of that one??? DUH! Thanks for looking in...and offering them perfect tweaks! Dan. [Linked Image]

Tampa,

Have a ZIN or three buddy, and you`ll melt them right together. I recall a little ditty some fellas did a few years back with the line "make em be doctors and lawyers and such" in it. I guess them fellas did OK with it [Linked Image] I`m bettin it`s ok to mix em. I`ll check back in and see if I got ya on the wagon or not. Thankee for lookin in big guy. Dan. [Linked Image]

Ricki,

Thanks Bemidjibabe! Yup, will do Blake`s fixes pronto. Thanks for noticing my "CLEVERITY". We`ll put it too good use! Dan. [Linked Image]

John,

Thank ya Johnny V! We think alot alike! How scary is that??? I figured I needed to use both to fully support the hook. As them thumbs up indicate...my inthreeition was correct. Thanks again. Dan. [Linked Image]

Janibama,

Thanks for the kudos Bama! Now I have enough of them saved up I can get that invisible ink pen...so I can write invisible lyrics. I`d post some on the board for ya after I get it...but you wouldn`t be able to see em. [Linked Image] Glad you enjoyed it...nuking kitchen...using innocent. Thanks again. Dan.

Thanks again everyone!