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RY X
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 04:03 PM
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Joined: Jan 2001
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This is my first comment on this board all month. (I've been browsing here and there, but haven't had Internet access at home and haven't been in much of a mood to post anyway.) The title of this lyric was enough to lure me out of retirement. You've done about as good a job as you can with this hook, but gawd, is it a bad hook, IMO. Some puns just aren't meant to be made into hooks, IMO, and this is one of 'em. It's a groaner to begin with, and worse yet, it makes you hafta juggle two widely different themes-- surgery and jurisprudence. I think an idea like this is better off in the wastebasket. But I've been wrong before! ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/wink.gif) I applaud the effort nonetheless. This works about as well as it can, but it's like making a really snazzy Edsel. Anthony
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