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Cavetown
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/09/25 01:00 AM
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Laufey
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/08/25 06:16 PM
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New dong
by Ken Randall - 10/08/25 12:49 AM
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I like this, it does have a good feel, but in its current state it reads more like an advertisement jingle (which isn't a bad thing - people make a lot of money doing that) for the restaurant, I think to bring more commercial appeal it needs a character(s)or more in depth story- as other posters have mentioned.
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