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Cavetown
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/09/25 01:00 AM
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Laufey
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/08/25 06:16 PM
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New dong
by Ken Randall - 10/08/25 12:49 AM
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https://www.jpfolks.com/forum/ubbthreads.php/topics/1208591/rednecks-round-here.html#Post1208591DD inspired this lyric lol... ========================== JoAnna Lyn likes my truck Tonight's the night I test my luck Button down shirt and a country road Yeah', Here we go Sparrows chirpin' in the trees Fresh mown hay in the breeze Mason jar 'tween her knees That smile is killin' me Cutoff jeans and Southern peaches Old guitars and friends of Jesus Mountain shine and lime is fine Bonfire burnin' bright, we're dancin' Dancin'neath the moon tonight Billy and Sue showed up too Tailgate down and missin' their shoes Me and my friends know what to do Rock-n-Roll Country Blues Just three strums and we're in tune Angel's voices join in soon Billy and Me find the right key The girls sing Bobby McGee For all good hearted people Grateful, blessed, and equal Country just means simple ...Dancin'neath the moon tonight =========================== Somebody(everybody) take this for a spin in AI. Hint: The "mood" I'm looking for is in the lyric  Don't spend too much time trying to create a finished product, I'm just looking for inspiration. Dom, show us what you got!
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#3 is closest to what I had in mind but with an acoustic... However, I love that harmonica in #1 ! I also like the voice in #1 The bridge is also the best in #3 but could use some harmony. None got the last lines of the chorus quite right... Bonfire burnin' bright(pause 2beats) we're danci-----------n' Dancin'neath the moon toni-------------ght Ha! Look at me orchestrating lol  Sure wish I could play harmonica.... Those are great, Rob! THANX Let's see if anyone else gives it a spin. I may just mash'em up None of them are hitting "JO-Anna Lyn" quite right either lol...
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Maybe I can play a little slide instead of harmonica...?
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Why don't you try it yourself. Suno gives you 10 songs per day for free
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None got the last lines of the chorus quite right...
Bonfire burnin' bright(pause 2beats) we're danci-----------n'
Dancin'neath the moon toni-------------ght Well, Tony. You didn't write the lyrics like that. You wrote: Bonfire burnin' bright, we're dancin' Dancin'neath the moon tonight What you should have written is this: Bonfire burnin' bright We're dancin' Dancin' neath the moon tonight I'm not saying Suno would have gotten it right that way, but your chances would have been higher
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At least, now you have a few ideas to play around with. It looks like you had your chorus laid out to begin with. You could modify #3 appropriately if that one was the closest. Either record it yourself or ask Suno for a cover of #3 saying you want acoustic guitars.
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Yeah', I've noticed that lyric placement is kinda 50/50...
Would be nice if the "operator" could really fine-tune that.
Sure nailed the rhythm though!
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At least, now you have a few ideas to play around with. It looks like you had your chorus laid out to begin with. You could modify #3 appropriately if that one was the closest. Either record it yourself or ask Suno for a cover of #3 saying you want acoustic guitars. Just leav'em up for a while, I've got a file full of riffs I need to pick through
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Yeah', I've noticed that lyric placement is kinda 50/50...
Would be nice if the "operator" could really fine-tune that.
Sure nailed the rhythm though! In Suno you can "replace" sections. In your case, you would mark the last two lines of the chorus, modify the placement of the words and request a new version of that section. Suno will then give you alternatives and if you like one, it will replace the old one seamlessly. I've done that before. It is possible, but a bit time consuming. I won't do that here because this is not my song. You could also let Suno create a cover version of this track using modified lyrics (with the new placements). That might be easier and in the process you can also redefine the instruments you want Suno to use. You could ask for a harmonica. You have tons of options.
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Tony,
I remember back in the day and age of SW101 we would all help each other. Remember how we all collaborated with each other back then? I think those days are gone. Good luck with this one. I'd love to hear what the final version sounds like. Your lyrics are really good.
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Tony,
I remember back in the day and age of SW101 we would all help each other. Remember how we all collaborated with each other back then? I think those days are gone. Good luck with this one. I'd love to hear what the final version sounds like. Your lyrics are really good. Well, collaboration has never happened online as much as I would like lol... But, you're right. Things were much different 25yrs ago. It's a shame, I feel like I'm just now getting the hang of "Logic" lol...
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It's a shame, I feel like I'm just now getting the hang of "Logic" lol... Oh yes, I know what you're talking about. I'm much older than you. I just wrote a song about that topic. It's called "Old Age Comes At A Bad Time": https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=15100096Good old rock'n roll...
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