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Hi Calvin,

This is funny. The only thing I would change is the first verse because when you say your rump roast is wheat it sounds confusing. I'm guessing you mean their eating bread or wheat pasta in lieu of beef but I would make that more understandable there.

You have:
A green piece of luttuce
Your rump roast is wheat
My career is affected
By the things you eat

How about:
A crisp head of lettuce (since it's obvious lettuce is green)
An apple, a peach,
My career (job) is affected,
By the things that you eat or (by the things you don't eat).

Maybe add "red" to your last line of 2nd verse so it reads:

If you don't eat red meat.

Best,
Lynn