Tricia,

I like them equally well. Yeah, that's a lot of help, isn't it!! If you are going to use the 2nd version, one small nit. KOS, as usual.

Her body framed in SOFT moonlight

Just seems to meter a little better. But, could be just me...often it is. Regardless of the version you decide to run with, I like the heck out of it!

Alan

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