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Hi Tricia,
How sweet, simple and nicely done! You said so much and painted such a vivid picture with so few words. And you worked a very difficult rhyming scheme so easily.
Some will say that you should not use the hook in the verses if you have a chorus (okay with a bridge, though). However, more recent convention has said that it is okay as long as you use it at the same location in every verse...but must be the first or last line of the verses.
Marvelous job. Was looking to find a nit so I wouldn't sound like all fluff. Couldn't do it, though. Very nice!
Alan
Last edited by sideman66; 01/07/07 02:12 AM.
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