Originally Posted by Tricia Baker
No, I'm not gay. I write from a man's perspective alot, though, because my cowriters are male. It's not my fault.

Nice disclaimer, I'll have to remember that, I've gotten myself into a few sticky situations because of this before. grin

I only have a couple of suggestions, and it could be the grammar police in me who wants to strike all the thats in the lyric. Aside from that , I think this is simple, lovely, and very warm grin

Once upon a summer time
There was a girl that I called mine
Her kisses tasted sweet AS wine
In Ensenada

Pretty little seniorita
Heaven sent, a real man pleaser
Wrought iron gates that couldn’t keep her
In Ensenada

Great work, Tricia!!
wink Tink


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