Hey Tricia,
Love your hook. Well written. Actually I'd heard of
Ensenada so the wrought iron gates and old Mexico fit all right. Course I've got a nit . I didn't get through the whole thread, but didn't see anyone mention it, so might just be me, but "commercially", the "Sweeter than wine" thing
has been done a whole lot. OK,I'm thinkin', I'm thinkin'
Well, these aren't necessarily lines and probably won't fit the meter, but just thoughts

Once upon a summer's eve
There was a girl who smiled at me
Her kisses free and angel sweet

Got a good thing goin' though
Wy