Dan..... are you channeling TampaStan here or something??? Cuz if you put some of your words in all caps or quotation marks, I'd swear Stan wrote this. (Not that there's anything wrong with that! [Linked Image] ) Not much to it here. The chorus seemed a but short to me 'til I realized it functioned more like a refrain. The "wish" line seemed forced, and I don't know what "rammin and jammin" means. Also, you mispronounced "Pokemon", but that's probably a good thing to do in a lyric like this.

Good job overall! Very catchy, and mostly true! [Linked Image]

Anthony

P.S.: Where the heck *is* TampaStan, anyway? Anybody know???


[This message has been edited by Anthony (edited 10-02-2001).]