Bob,
Thanks for the kind remarks. That it's likable means more to me than it's singable. The art and craft of writing involves more than meets the eye , to be sure. If one pops out that flows well and tells a story I'll be two thirds there, only lacking the appropriate tunes.
Pete


Here we are wracking our brains today
to write lyrics that rhyme
and if we succeed, they'll end up in time
as tommorrow's cliche's...
Pete