Well, there are eight verses and no chorus... Is this a country song?
To tell you the truth - this one just confused me. I think it's about meeting someone accidentally and having 'a moment' with them you won't forget, but since nothing is repeated it's hard to find what you want the listener to remember from this song. They'll likely end up remembering the never, never, ever, ever part at the end...
I think that this one could use some editing.
Lee Anna


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