pete you nut...you from maine or an implant? like ritt's remark on lyrically deranged. Liked alot of the lines in your song...The linen was woven into the cloud , like bed-especially that one. Bruce Springsteen doesn't always use a typical chorus...his lines are brilliant like Pearl Jam. I could go on and on with examples that aren't country. Have you done open-mic yet? Linda


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