Now I know you wrote this just because of my comments on your last collab [Linked Image]

In my head melody, i wanted to get rid of "puts in" in v1,

and line 1 of v2 did not want to follow the pattern of line 1 of v2

ie

scratching out a living in the hard red clay

repeats melodically better as

chasing down the rows after that ole mule


and maybe an alternate for the first two lines of the bridge to smooth that technology bump

it might look like dirt poor's not much
sure doesn't look like he has enough

that's about it from here

ciao

If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop