Lol let it be and born in the USA.

The hook repeating is fine, yours is "the language of your eyes"

Not eyes, ..

Its not that I didn't understand the story.

Doesn't have to be a story.

But the language of your eyes is vaguely supported in your song.

And is over kill on the ears, honest to God it was the first thought I had...why so many eyes

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