Originally Posted by John Lawrence Schick
The "dog" angle got to me. I had to fight off tears. I hate lyrics that clogs up my sinuses - ha, ha. The music is appealing and does it justice. I imagine the production is 100% Suno. The simplicity of the chord progression makes it almost impossible not to sound like it was already done somewhere back in time. But I don't know. Anyway, I never listen to Suno productions. This was my first time. And I hate myself for doing it. Why? Because it struck an emotional nerve. I really liked it. The lead guitar part, though nice, took me away from my emotions that the lyrics & melody provided. Maybe better without it. A couple riffs in between the lyrical melody may be better.

Best, John smile


Thank you for listening John. I worked very hard on those lyrics and melody. It took me awhile to get verse 3, but when it came i was very relieved. (smile)

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