Hmmmmn...

I agree with John, kill the generic AI guitar solo.

And if you really want to make the kids cry...

Grab an Fm after the third verse for a bridge;

Another dose of Nitrostat, another EKG
No more tequila shots or "life of the party"
Her fat old ass can no longer dance
She traded her "Twerk" for a heartbeat
And that old dog got hit by a truck
...In 1973


Then one more round of that beautiful AIchorus! smile