Originally Posted by JAPOV
What's the point, Rob?
If this $hit is all I get...

Tony,
your song has nothing to do with those other examples. Those names you use (JoAnna Lyn, Billy and Sue) are typical for the country or country-rock genre, not pop. Your title is similar, but different. Honestly, just a few weeks ago I wrote a song called „Beneath The Moonlight“. People should be able to write completely different songs that have similar titles. I have a bunch of songs that are loaded with generic cliches. Who cares. Look at the top 40. Many of those songs are full of cliches. You shouldn't take what people say here too personal. I think your lyric is worth recording and would love to hear what you come up with. But that's up to you man.