Hi Brian!

Thank you for taking the time to listen, and comment. I had a few versions of this as a bluegrass tune, but preferred the slower pace since that's where my head was at when I wrote it, and this version was very close to the melody I had in my head while writing it. The slower pace was the thing I liked most about living in the Carolinas, if I do a re-write using your suggestions, the slower paced life would be what I'd most likely emphasize.

I think writing challenges are a lot of fun, whether we would be given a subject, or theme to write about. also, in my mind the thing I find the hardest to do is to write to existing music, I've done it before, and I think I got better because of it.

As far as moving this to the AI section, I will leave that up to you, I will be posting in AI next time.


I'm inclined to be musical
But I'm not musicaly inclined